Would someone who knows what they're doing be willing to proofread my novel?

I would like a a good writer or creative writing professor or someone to proofread the first couple pages of my novel. It's not long but I don't want to post it on here, I would like to email it to you, or maybe if I could upload it to a site or something and then send you the link that would work. I don't need it proofed for grammatical errors and such, but for my writing. Things such as the words I use, if I'm "showing" and not telling, my dialougue, point, of view, empty adverbs, flat writing, not using the "to be" words (was, are, ect), and things like that. So if you think you can do that, and you don't mind me emailing it to you, or if you have an idea for another way, I would greatly appreciate it and I will give you the ten points! Thanks!